NejiTen Fireflies (new) WIP

I blame this cute couple for beeing so cute, pervect and stealing the time I wanted to use for a composition for school! D:

This is a "work in progess" a picture I want to use for an improvement meme.
Here is the old one: [link]
First I wanted to use this one, [link] (more details, background, better movements, better outfits, more blood, etc.), but the NejiTen was a present for Suma, so I made this instead.

Suma is a really good friend that also gives good advises:
*le me in boring school subject without teacher*: Suma, tell me where I have to improve.
Suma*checking stuff on the internet*: I don't know...
Me: Come on. Something~...
Suma*still mentally absent*: um... u draw Gai too muscular... make him more human... *totally absent because the "GAI" word fell*
Me: (thinking of thousands of reasons why I draw him that way) okay...

U see, she gives good advise.

Really, she's awesome! (for real, now)